The System Won't Work Unless I Have Girlfriends

Honestly, I don't even understand some of the comments because they're just like, 'I don't like it,' without explaining further, no single fuck. What's funny is that I thought everyone had dropped the fanfic, but there are still more than 6k people who have saved the book (up to this time) which confuses me?

I admit I got a bit lazy after seeing people criticize the concept of having two reincarnations without even giving it a try. It's not like anything major or like ntr is happening. Holy sheet.

Read at your own risk. No one's forcing you to click on this and read it.

If you keep reading it while self-inserting into the story so much, why not write one yourself so I can read it too? Not being sarcastic here, I respect yall, and I'm happy if you enjoyed my story up to a certain point (chapter 60, I guess). Since ya made it up to 60 chapters, why not give real feedback so I can improve as a writer?

Five-star reviews without context are better than one star reviews without context because, as a writer, it's rewarding. If you re too lazy to explain your critique, that's your problem but don't be asshole just because most of us are anonymous here.

In my defense, I don't think having two reincarnated characters is an issue, especially there's still only one main character in the story. While the theme is realistic as possible even with the system.

So far, I think the story is on track because there will be an explanation about Yuuya like what kind of gacha he got from the system besides Masamune, who is the main character of this story.

About the system, you'll notice him (Yuuya) is just a normal human without magic. So, the system is the same as Masamune without weird power up like magic.

For example, when he got the Cristiano Ronaldo gacha, he had to train for seven months to adapt to the knowledge and talent he received. His body wouldn't move the way he wanted it to if it wasn't properly trained, just like Cristiano did. Anyway, there won't be any magic shenanigans in this fanfic.

The reason I decided on this concept is because I personally dislike MC who don't struggle at least a little. Besides, there's nothing that can challenge the MC when they're rich and powerful, so I came up with a minor villain.

I got inspiration from JJK, where the world tries to balance itself after Gojo is born. That's how the idea of two reincarnated people with the same system came to me when I was outlining this fanfic from beginning to end.

If you don't like the direction with two reincarnated souls from the same world, I'm really sorry for disappointing you. I'm also very thankful for the support (power stones, good comments)

luv u people.