Chapter 1: Welcome too Lugunica
"They are finally sealed."
A man stood tall, his long hair flowing in the wind, his sharp eyes surveying the scene before him. He took a deep breath, exhaustion evident in his stance. This was Flugel, the great mage, and before him lay the culmination of a battle that had stretched the limits of human endurance.
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Before him, eight figures stood encased in their respective prisons—some had willingly accepted their fate, while others had fought to their last breath. Flugel's gaze swept across them one by one.
The first was a half-elf, her delicate frame appearing even more fragile in her suspended state. Long silver hair cascaded over her shoulders, and her blue-purple eyes—now frozen in time—once held emotions too deep to comprehend. This was Satella, the Witch of Envy.
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Next to her, encased in a crystalline prison of ice, was a woman of striking beauty. Her flowing, snow-white hair framed a face of near-ethereal elegance, her piercing black eyes forever locked in an expression of unreadable wisdom. Dressed in a full-length black gown, she carried the air of an unfathomable intellect. This was Echidna, the Witch of Greed.
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Beside her stood another, her petite figure betraying the power she once wielded. Her long blonde hair was tied into a ponytail, a pink-and-blue hairclip resting above her determined blue eyes. This was Minerva, the Witch of Wrath.
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Then came a young girl, barely ten years old. Her large, round red eyes brimmed with curiosity, and her short, dark green hair framed a face too innocent for the horrors she had witnessed. This was Typhon, the Witch of Pride.
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Next to her was a woman of soft, almost dreamlike beauty. Pale pink hair cascaded in loose waves, framing her delicate features. Her round red eyes were downcast, a stark contrast to the power she held. Unlike the others, she had chosen this fate willingly. This was Carmilla, the Witch of Lust.
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Then came a languid figure, the very essence of effortless grace. Her absurdly long magenta hair trailed down to her toes, her violet lips parted slightly as if on the verge of some careless remark. Even in her sealed state, she exuded an aura of indifference. This was Sekhmet, the Witch of Sloth.
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His gaze moved to a blindfolded girl, her small frame bound in physical restraints. Her golden eyes remained hidden, her presence an unsettling mix of innocence and malevolence. This was Daphne, the Witch of Gluttony.
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And finally, the last of them—a breathtakingly beautiful young woman whose platinum hair shimmered as if woven from light itself. Her deep blue, slit-pupiled eyes held an inhuman perfection that made her presence both mesmerizing and terrifying. A simple white cloth draped over her body, doing little to conceal the air of absolute authority she carried. This was Pandora, the Witch of Vainglory.
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A voice broke the silence.
"Are you sure this will hold, Master?"
Flugel turned to see Shaula, his ever-loyal apprentice. A tall, striking woman, she tied her long, dark brown hair into a "scorpion tail," her green eyes sharp with concern. Her revealing attire—a black bikini top, hotpants, and a tattered black-and-orange cloak—reflected her true nature as a powerful Witchbeast.
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Flugel exhaled, running a hand through his hair. "As long as no one on my level interferes, they will remain sealed. They're in suspended animation—no aging, no dying." He smirked. "And what are the chances of that happening?"
Present Day - Earth
Natsuki Subaru stepped out of his house, a new manga in one hand and a bag of chips in the other. Today was supposed to be just another ordinary day.
But the moment he stepped forward—
Blink.
He found himself back where he started.
Blink.
He tried again.
Blink.
Still the same spot.
"What the hell…?" Subaru muttered, his heart beginning to race. Something was wrong.
Meanwhile, in a space beyond mortal comprehension, eight figures sat in a dimly lit room, observing Subaru with great interest.
Minerva slammed her hands on the table. "Okay, what the hell is going on?! Why can't we summon him?!"
Carmilla's voice wavered with concern. "H-he's dying... again and again... he's already died five times… w-what's happening…?"
A chuckle echoed through the space, drawing all eyes toward Echidna.
"Simple," she said, a smirk playing on her lips. "His body can't handle our combined power all at once. So, it's shutting down—permanently."
Typhon's expression fell, her red eyes glistening with worry. "Oh no… what do we do? We can't just let big brother die like this!"
Pandora, who had been quietly analyzing Subaru's memories, finally spoke. "I have an idea. His body can't withstand our authorities all at once... but what if we spread it out over time?"
Sekhmet, for once, seemed wide awake. "Explain."
Satella, her voice barely above a whisper, pleaded, "Please… tell us."
Pandora's smile was as mysterious as ever. "Return by Death is already bound to his soul. That means we can integrate the rest of our powers—gradually. And to do that…"
She gestured toward the gathered witches.
"We give him something to help him adapt. A tool. A guide. A system."
Silence.
Then, Minerva scowled. "You mean like in those video games and manhwa he reads?"
Pandora nodded. "Exactly. But with structure. No random dungeons, no artificial leveling—just gradual progression." She leaned forward, her voice carrying an eerie certainty.
"I call it… The Sin System."
Another pause.
Then, Satella's voice rang clear. "If it stops the death loop and brings him to us, then let's do it."
Minerva grumbled but nodded. "Fine. But if this turns into some overcomplicated nonsense, I'll personally—"
Daphne tilted her head. "You couldn't have thought of a better name?"
And with that, fate was set in motion.
Natsuki Subaru's journey had just begun.
Subaru wandered through the unfamiliar streets, his mind racing with excitement. This is seriously like a fantasy world! No, it is a fantasy world!
As he took in his surroundings, his gaze landed on a young child standing alone near an alleyway. The kid was making strange hand gestures, and before Subaru could react—a shadowy arm emerged from the child's back.
Just as his instincts screamed at him to move, a voice echoed in his head.
"Don't."
Subaru's body froze. He quickly looked around, searching for the source of the voice, but no one seemed to be talking to him.
Before he could process it, a knight rushed in and saved the child, cutting off the eerie moment. Subaru let out a breath he didn't realize he was holding and decided he needed some space to think.
He turned into a nearby alleyway, rubbing his temples. What the hell was that?
But before he could gather his thoughts—
Ding!
A glowing screen suddenly appeared in front of his face, blinding him with a rapid flash of colors—white, blue, purple, black, pink, yellow, green, and gold.
Subaru groaned, shielding his eyes. "Argh! I feel like I just got blasted by a rainbow…"
As his vision adjusted, text began to form on the screen.
[Sin System Activated
Name: Subaru Natsuki
Title: Transmigrated, The One Who Returns by Death, The One Loved by All Witches
Abilities:
Return By Death (100%) – [Allows the host to return after dying at a fixed checkpoint. The world is destroyed and remade upon activation. Fused with soul.]
Wisdom of Greed (1%) – [Grants the ability to acquire and utilize knowledge or skills. Fused with soul.]
Compassionate Wrath (1%) – [Enables healing others, but the user experiences the pain of those they heal. Fused with soul.]
Invisible Providence – [Summons an invisible hand-like appendage for telekinetic movement.]
Gluttonous Consumption – [Allows the user to consume anything, including memories and abilities.]
Lustful Allure – [Grants the ability to charm and manipulate others.]
Prideful Dominion – [Allows the user to command and control others.]
Vainglorious Illusion – [Enables the user to create and manipulate illusions.]
Death Points: 5
Sin Points: 20]
Subaru blinked at the screen, his mind struggling to keep up. "Wait… what?!"
Before he could even process the information, eight chibi figures suddenly appeared on the screen, waving at him.
[Minerva, the first to speak, smiled warmly. "Hello! We're here to guide you and help you understand this system."]
Subaru stared at the small, floating versions of the Witches of Sin. "Okay… this is officially the weirdest thing that's happened to me today."
[Echidna smirked, crossing her arms. "Let's start with the basics. Each of your abilities comes from one of us. 'Wisdom of Greed' is from me."
Satella whispered softly, "Return by Death… is mine."
Minerva nodded. "Compassionate Wrath is my ability."
Sekhmet yawned. "Invisible Providence is from me. Hope you like it."
Daphne, removing her blindfold, grinned. "Gluttonous Consumption is mine~."
Carmilla shyly fidgeted, "L-Lustful Allure is from me… Sorry if that makes you uncomfortable."
Typhon beamed. "Prideful Dominion is mine, big brother!"
Pandora smirked. "And Vainglorious Illusion is mine. You probably guessed that already."
She continued, "Over time, you'll gain access to more of our abilities."]
Subaru's brain overloaded. "I—I have so many questions."
[Minerva clapped her hands. "Okay! Next is your 'Sin Points' and 'Death Points.' These are used in the system's shop."
Carmilla explained, "You earn Sin Points by using our powers… or by doing anything sinful."
Pandora grinned. "And Death Points? You get those every time you die and come back using Return by Death."
Echidna sighed dramatically. "Sin Points are like in-game currency, like gold. But Death Points? They're basically what pay-to-win players use to ruin a game's balance. COMPLETELY DESTROYING THE CHALLENGE!" She coughed. "Ahem… anyway, in the shop, most items only cost 0.1 Death Points."
Pandora smiled. "You'll also be receiving missions. That's all for now."]
Subaru stared at the screen for a long moment, his expression blank.
"…I am so confused."
Subaru then spoke taking a deep breath, as he looked at a very colourful system screen. "I have so many questions but main one is".
[Echidna then spoke looking at him. "What we are, we the witch's O-]
She was then cut of Subaru the spoke. "Why is the something called the Sin System so colour ful".
[Echidna twitched, clearly annoyed at being interrupted, but before she could retort, Minerva burst out laughing.]
[Minerva clutched her stomach as she spoke between giggles. "I know, right? You'd think something called the 'Sin System' would be all dark and ominous, but nope! We got the whole rainbow!"]
[Pandora smirked, resting her chin on her hand. "Well, sin is… colorful, in a way. Every sin has its own flavor, its own allure. Why stick to just black and red when we can dazzle?"]
[Daphne nodded, rocking back and forth. "It's easier… to draw people in… if it looks fun."]
[Carmilla blushed, shyly glancing away. "I-I thought it should be… u-um… appealing…"]
[Echidna sighed, pinching the bridge of her nose. "It was supposed to be aesthetic… but it seems someone got a little too enthusiastic with the color scheme."]
[Typhon grinned, raising her hand. "That was me! Colors make everything better!"]
Subaru stared at them, utterly dumbfounded. "So you're telling me that my supposedly ominous and terrifying Sin System looks like a carnival because you guys wanted it to?"
[Sekhmet yawned, lazily waving a hand. "Does it really matter? As long as it works, right?"]
Subaru groaned, rubbing his temples. "I feel like I should be worried about more important things… but this is really throwing me off."
[Pandora smirked, snapping her fingers. "Well, you'll get used to it, darling. Now, let's focus on the real fun—the missions."]
Subaru gulped. "That doesn't sound reassuring at all…"
Subaru then spoke looking at them. "So each colour is one of your individual Colours and so you all put the colour then".
[Pandora nodded looking at them as she spoke. "Yup"]
Subaru sighed, rubbing his temples. "So, let me get this straight. Each of you has your own color, and you all just... mashed them together?"
[Pandora nodded with a bright smile. "Yup!"]
Subaru groaned. "No wonder it looks like a rainbow exploded in my face."
[Echidna smirked. "You should feel honored! This is a system crafted by the Witches of Sin themselves."]
"Yeah, yeah..." Subaru muttered, still trying to process everything. "So, what's the catch? There's always a catch."
[Minerva crossed her arms. "No catch, just a little guidance from us!"]
[Satella's soft voice echoed. "We'll help you... always."]
Subaru felt a chill run down his spine. Something told him this was going to be way more complicated than it seemed.
Subaru paled at Sekhmet's words. "Wait, wait, brain blast? That sounds painful!"
[Echidna smirked. "Oh, don't worry. It'll only feel like having centuries of knowledge crammed into your head all at once."]
"That's exactly what I'm worried about!" Subaru took a step back, waving his hands. "How about we go one thing at a time?"
[Sekhmet yawned again. "Fine, whatever. Let's start with missions then."]
[Pandora smiled. "Missions will be given based on your actions and surroundings. Some are mandatory, others optional. Completing them gives rewards like Sin Points, items, or even new abilities."]
[Echidna added, "And failing some missions may have... consequences."]
Subaru gulped. "Define consequences?"
[Pandora giggled. "You'll find out~"]
Subaru groaned, already regretting asking. "Okay, what's my first mission then?"
[Ding!
Mission: First Steps in a New World
Explore the city and gather information
Optional: Help someone in need (+Bonus Reward)
Rewards: +10 Sin Points, ???]
Subaru blinked. "…Alright, this doesn't seem too bad."
[Sekhmet smirked. "That's what they all say at first."]
Subaru then spoke too the system. "So now what?".
[Echidna then gave him a smirk as she spoken. "We are just gonna brain blast you with all this world's knowledge".]
Subaru then spoke sweeting. "Wait wait wait".
To be continued
Hope people like this Ch and Give me Power stones and enjoy, I wanted too write theu fanfic ever sense the all Witches were revealed and it good thing I waited as there is a lot of things happening, also Vote on who will get the first R18
1. Satella
2. Echidna
3. Minerva
4. Carmilla
5. Pandora
6. Daphne
7. Sketch