Ultimate Spider-Man System

Hey there Guys, Sparky here!!

I wanted to take a moment to address some feedback I've been receiving about the story. I've noticed that some of you weren't entirely happy with how certain aspects of the story have been progressing. Furthermore, I really appreciate your honesty because, If I didn't want any feedback, I wouldn't post it here and just write for myself. That said, I've already made some adjustments to improve the story. Here's what's changed so far:

1. Aunt May does not any longer know about the system, and only knows that Peter somehow created a Flash Grenade out of thin air and called it Magic.

2. Aunt May is no longer the Woman in the Chair, as she is just not qualified to do so and will just stay home and be happy when Peter gets back home safe.

I hope these changes resonate with you! But I also know that some readers have voiced concerns about the protagonist's behavior and called him "stupid."

To clarify:

This version of Peter Parker isn't as intelligent as the original Peter from the comics or movies. He has no memories of that of Peter's life or experiences. However, he does have a photographic memory and a very fast processing speed. The problem is that he hasn't fully utilized these abilities yet in meaningful ways. Humans have flaws, especially in Fiction, so they can develop as a Character.

Still, I want to hear your feedback on his characterization. How do you feel about his actions and decisions so far? If there are specific instances in the novel that felt out of character or unreasonable, please point them out and explain what you'd like to see instead. It's hard for me to address vague critiques like "he's stupid" without concrete examples to work with. I thought his actions made sense at the time of writing, but if they didn't come across that way to you, I want to fix it, or explain better why he did, what he did!

Now, on to some exciting updates!

Since I'm waiting for Patreon to verify my account, I have a bit of extra time, and I wanted to share what's coming next:

Chapter Releases:

From now on, I'll be sticking to a new schedule as I reached my 10 Chapter mark. There will be one chapter on Webnovel, and another additional one available on Patreon Per day.

Exclusive Content on Patreon:

Patreon will also be the hub for bonus content. This includes:

Pictures of characters and items from the story.

NSFW artwork for every female character in the novel (for those interested in that side of the story).

Opportunities for fans to influence the story through voting polls and other Comments.

Thank you all for your support and constructive feedback. Your engagement means much to me, and I'm committed to making this story as enjoyable as possible. Keep the comments coming, and thanks for reading till now.

Cheers,

Sparky