the visionary

Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Light and Shadows The First Impression of Tourists



As more visitors arrived in Rafa's territory to participate in the Trial of the Aurora, they were amazed by the level of modernity and organization. For many, it was like stepping into a completely different world where magic and technology coexisted harmoniously.

Territory Vision (Third Person)

Tourists walked along streets paved with magical stones that glowed softly at night, illuminating every corner. Basic sanitation systems functioned perfectly, with invisible pipes purifying the water using elemental magic. Public schools were equipped with holographic devices that taught both science and magic, allowing children to learn advanced skills from an early age.

"This place is incredible," commented a merchant from a distant city, watching a child use a magical bracelet to levitate a stone during an outdoor class. "I've never seen anything like it."

Other visitors praised Rafa's elite force, known as the Guardians of the Aurora. These warriors patrolled the streets dressed in magical armor, ensuring everyone's safety without being oppressive. They used Kael's clones to monitor remote areas, ensuring no crime went unnoticed.

"The Guardians are so efficient that we don't even have to worry about thieves or bandits," a local woman told a group of tourists. "All thanks to our Visionary lord."

The Absolute Confidence of Citizens

For the inhabitants of the territory, Rafa was not just a ruler—he was an almost divine figure. His Visionary ability and his capacity to solve problems instantly had created an atmosphere of total trust.

Reflections of the Inhabitants (Third Person)

In taverns and squares, citizens talked about how their lives had changed since Rafa's arrival.

"Before, our crops died because of the cursed land," said an elderly farmer, holding a cup of cider. "Now, we have fertile fields and magical irrigation systems. All thanks to our lord."

A young mother added: "My daughter is learning magic in public school. Before, only nobles had access to this kind of education. Now, any child can dream big."

This absolute confidence was evident in every interaction. People did not question Rafa's decisions because they knew he always acted in their best interest.

Structure of Laws and Social Order

The territory's legal system was another point of admiration. Rafa had created a set of clear and fair laws based on principles of equality and progress.

Key Laws (Third Person) Equality of Opportunities: All citizens had access to the same resources, regardless of their social origin. Meritocracy: Leadership positions were granted based on skill and dedication, not heredity. Proportional Punishments: Crimes were punished according to their severity, but there was always room for redemption.

Additionally, Rafa had implemented a system of magical courts where judges used floating crystals to determine the truth in disputes. This eliminated corruption and ensured justice was impartial.

"The laws here are fair," commented a visiting noble while watching a magical court in action. "If my kingdom adopted something like this, perhaps we could end the corruption that plagues our capital."

Dark Plots Begin to Emerge

Despite the apparent perfection of the territory, not everything was as bright as it seemed. Dark plots began to unfold in the shadows, fueled by those who envied or feared Rafa's power.

First Betrayal (Third Person)

A group of local merchants, dissatisfied with the low taxes imposed by Rafa, began conspiring against him. They believed that if they could weaken his influence, they could take control of the territory and exploit its resources for their own benefit.

"He is powerful, but not invincible," whispered one of the conspirators in a dark tavern. "If we can convince the Guardians of the Aurora that he is losing control, perhaps we can overthrow him."

However, Kael and his clones were already monitoring these activities.

"Master," Kael said to Rafa while projecting holograms of the intercepted conversations. "There are signs of betrayal among some merchants. What do you wish to do?"

Rafa smiled coldly. "Let them conspire. When they are ready to act, I will eliminate them before they cause any trouble."

Envy of Nobles from Other Kingdoms

Meanwhile, nobles from other kingdoms began openly discussing how to replicate Rafa's model.

Discussion Among Nobles (Third Person)

In a luxurious meeting room, several nobles gathered to debate the success of Rafa's territory.

"He transformed a cursed land into a paradise," said a duke, pounding his fist on the table. "We need to find out how he did it."

Another noble hesitated before responding. "They say he uses advanced magic, something no one else can replicate. But maybe we can send spies to learn his methods."

"Or simply take his territory by force," suggested a third with a cruel smile.

Although these discussions were secret, Rafa was already aware of them thanks to the Department of Shadows.

"Let them try," he murmured, observing a holographic map of neighboring regions. "But they underestimate what they will face."

Final Reflection

On the balcony of his tower, Rafa watched the movement below, reflecting on the future of his territory. He knew that his citizens' trust was a powerful weapon but also a responsibility.

"They see me as a savior," he thought as the wind blew gently. "But there are always those who envy or fear what they cannot control."

He knew that dark plots and the envy of nobles were inevitable. However, he also knew he had the power to face any challenge that arose.

"This territory is just the beginning," he concluded with a confident smile. "Soon, all of Eldoria will follow my example."


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