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Chapter 38 Answers some questions raised by the reader "8 Cloud-Zi" about the current plot
Chapter 38 answers some questions raised by the reader "Yakumo-Zi" about the current plot of the book (skip if you don't like it)
Early this morning, I saw the long comment written by Yakumo-Zi Daxie in the book review area late at night, and read it carefully several times. I feel that the book review written by the big brother is very attentive, which makes me very moved and inspired.
Because this is the first long book review received by this book in 18 days, I feel that it is necessary to open a single chapter to answer it.
The main problem raised by the boss is that the protagonist's character is not like an adult, and his acting style is taken for granted.
In fact, the author is very aware of this problem, but various reasons have caused the current situation.
1. The main reason is that the author is not strong enough.
Voldemort (Quirrell) is a very cunning person. He must be careful when he is in the enemy camp. When describing him, his cunning should be written at a higher level. At least he should not be so obvious that he is a villain. However, limited by the author's writing ability, in the end, he could only choose the most routine and facial makeup template of the villain big devil to describe.
2. The author is writing a book for the first time and lacks experience.
This is reflected in the fact that the author’s motivation for the protagonist to find Quirrell is not strong enough. The readers know the direction of the plot, so they don’t have a sense of urgency, but the protagonist does not know the direction of the plot, and the author does not focus on describing the protagonist. And is there a system in this book, if you can’t release a task, you can simply and rudely ask the protagonist to do something, so you need to describe the motivation for doing something clearly, and the author is not good enough at this point, so it seems It will appear very taken for granted, with a huge sense of separation.
This is also reflected in the fact that the author did not fully convey the information and conjectures of the protagonist to the readers. Because the protagonist does not know the plot, at this stage, he believes that the main threat will come from the outside, so he has no doubts about Professor Quirrell's villainous performance. , This is the information that the author did not convey to the readers. I will take the time to revise the previous chapters.
The same is true for the plot of the Thunderbird's eyes. After it appeared, I forgot to think about how to deal with and use the Thunderbird's eyes. For example, should I tell Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall to study together? Of course I will not tell, because there is no way to explain it The source of such a large and accurate ancient rune, besides, this is also the golden finger of the protagonist.Professor Quirrell only saw a part of the protagonist's recorded rune, and he used the ancient rune as a bargaining chip to seduce the protagonist, so he will not doubt the protagonist at this stage.Of course, this plot will also be modified to make the protagonist's behavior logic more perfect.
Finally, let me talk about the author's thoughts at this stage.
In fact, the author has never wanted the protagonist's strength to grow too fast, so the author has been very restrained in the growth of the protagonist's strength, because the author believes that the first grade is the time to lay the foundation, and wants to clarify the underlying logic of the protagonist's strength during this time period, not just Only the protagonist has been upgraded from level 1 to level 10.
But now it is undoubtedly a failure to do so, which leads to a slow pace of the book, and the protagonist's weakness and ignorance of the plot will limit his influence on the plot, which will reduce readers' expectations.
Although the author is generating electricity for love, everyone wants better results, so in order to increase readers' sense of expectation, I overturned the previous outline and began to increase the weight of Quilo's line, because I think a person who doesn't know There will be a lot of interesting dramatic conflicts between Xiaobai and the big devil in the plot, which will make readers have a sense of expectation, but looking back at this paragraph now, the turning point is indeed quite blunt
For the first time, I feel that my characters are starting to rebel against me.
Writing code is my main job, and writing novels is my side job, but the difference between the two is too great!
A code is a frozen text, but a novel is a tense text.
A string of codes, if you ask him to return zero, he will definitely return zero.
But a person in the book, what you ask him to do, he may not necessarily listen to you
Just like I couldn't let Allen learn the Disarming Curse, Flying Curse, and Disillusionment Curse all at once.
Because all the actions of the characters must speak a certain logic.
Some readers may say that you are the author and you are the God of this book, but what I want to say is that even God must speak logic!
Finally, I would like to thank Yakumo-Zi Daxie for his book review again, and welcome more readers to give their opinions on this book. The author has a very good temper. I will study and read every opinion carefully. Every opinion will become a nutrient for my growth and progress!
Thanks to the readers who have seen this, let’s not say more, let’s go to the code!
(End of this chapter)
Early this morning, I saw the long comment written by Yakumo-Zi Daxie in the book review area late at night, and read it carefully several times. I feel that the book review written by the big brother is very attentive, which makes me very moved and inspired.
Because this is the first long book review received by this book in 18 days, I feel that it is necessary to open a single chapter to answer it.
The main problem raised by the boss is that the protagonist's character is not like an adult, and his acting style is taken for granted.
In fact, the author is very aware of this problem, but various reasons have caused the current situation.
1. The main reason is that the author is not strong enough.
Voldemort (Quirrell) is a very cunning person. He must be careful when he is in the enemy camp. When describing him, his cunning should be written at a higher level. At least he should not be so obvious that he is a villain. However, limited by the author's writing ability, in the end, he could only choose the most routine and facial makeup template of the villain big devil to describe.
2. The author is writing a book for the first time and lacks experience.
This is reflected in the fact that the author’s motivation for the protagonist to find Quirrell is not strong enough. The readers know the direction of the plot, so they don’t have a sense of urgency, but the protagonist does not know the direction of the plot, and the author does not focus on describing the protagonist. And is there a system in this book, if you can’t release a task, you can simply and rudely ask the protagonist to do something, so you need to describe the motivation for doing something clearly, and the author is not good enough at this point, so it seems It will appear very taken for granted, with a huge sense of separation.
This is also reflected in the fact that the author did not fully convey the information and conjectures of the protagonist to the readers. Because the protagonist does not know the plot, at this stage, he believes that the main threat will come from the outside, so he has no doubts about Professor Quirrell's villainous performance. , This is the information that the author did not convey to the readers. I will take the time to revise the previous chapters.
The same is true for the plot of the Thunderbird's eyes. After it appeared, I forgot to think about how to deal with and use the Thunderbird's eyes. For example, should I tell Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall to study together? Of course I will not tell, because there is no way to explain it The source of such a large and accurate ancient rune, besides, this is also the golden finger of the protagonist.Professor Quirrell only saw a part of the protagonist's recorded rune, and he used the ancient rune as a bargaining chip to seduce the protagonist, so he will not doubt the protagonist at this stage.Of course, this plot will also be modified to make the protagonist's behavior logic more perfect.
Finally, let me talk about the author's thoughts at this stage.
In fact, the author has never wanted the protagonist's strength to grow too fast, so the author has been very restrained in the growth of the protagonist's strength, because the author believes that the first grade is the time to lay the foundation, and wants to clarify the underlying logic of the protagonist's strength during this time period, not just Only the protagonist has been upgraded from level 1 to level 10.
But now it is undoubtedly a failure to do so, which leads to a slow pace of the book, and the protagonist's weakness and ignorance of the plot will limit his influence on the plot, which will reduce readers' expectations.
Although the author is generating electricity for love, everyone wants better results, so in order to increase readers' sense of expectation, I overturned the previous outline and began to increase the weight of Quilo's line, because I think a person who doesn't know There will be a lot of interesting dramatic conflicts between Xiaobai and the big devil in the plot, which will make readers have a sense of expectation, but looking back at this paragraph now, the turning point is indeed quite blunt
For the first time, I feel that my characters are starting to rebel against me.
Writing code is my main job, and writing novels is my side job, but the difference between the two is too great!
A code is a frozen text, but a novel is a tense text.
A string of codes, if you ask him to return zero, he will definitely return zero.
But a person in the book, what you ask him to do, he may not necessarily listen to you
Just like I couldn't let Allen learn the Disarming Curse, Flying Curse, and Disillusionment Curse all at once.
Because all the actions of the characters must speak a certain logic.
Some readers may say that you are the author and you are the God of this book, but what I want to say is that even God must speak logic!
Finally, I would like to thank Yakumo-Zi Daxie for his book review again, and welcome more readers to give their opinions on this book. The author has a very good temper. I will study and read every opinion carefully. Every opinion will become a nutrient for my growth and progress!
Thanks to the readers who have seen this, let’s not say more, let’s go to the code!
(End of this chapter)
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