the story of the banished side

Hi everyone, I have a question for you all. I've been struggling with motivation to write this story, and I think it's because I haven't received many comments or reviews. I can't help but feel like there might be something about my story that you don't like. Furthermore, I would really appreciate it if you could share any suggestions or complaints you might have. Please take a moment to let me know what you like or dislike about the story. Thank you!

And I have a new fan fic in my mind where the protagonist help The NTR protagonists to get their revenge in a more mentally way than physically. If you want, I can write that story too.