Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.

This story is experimental, and also my first story. I need your feedback to understand what works and doesn't work. The goal of this chapter is to collect helpful feedback.

The process is simple. You will comment "+1" in the line of the poll. Every comment is a vote. It will take less than 2 minutes!

# Reader Knowledge

1. I watched the original "Steven Universe".

2. I don't know the original.

# Protagonist

1. The protagonist is Enjoyable.

2. The protagonist is Boring/Neutral.

3. Different. Comment.

# Side Characters

1. The characters seem human to me.

2. The characters seem 2D and superficial.

3. Different. Comment.

# Story Tone

1. The tone is most time fun and light.

2. The tone is most time sad and dark.

3. This story gives me mixed feelings.

4. Different. Comment.

# Story Pace

1. I'm satisfied with the slow pace.

2. I'm unsatisfied with the slow pace.

3. Different. Comment.

# Multiple POVs

1. The multiple POVs are interesting and don't seem like fillers.

2. The multiple POVs are interesting but skippable.

3. The multiple POVs aren't interesting or even necessary.

4. Different. Comment.

# Reader's disposition

1. This story is still good, I'm curious for the next volumes.

2. This story is getting boring, the next volumes seem uninteresting.

3. I sincerely consider dropping (comment).

4. Different. Comment.

# Similar storytelling

1. This story reminds me of similar stories.

2. The concept of this story is unusual and far from my usual reading. 

3. Different. Comment.

# EXTRA CHAPTERS / SIDE STORIES

Suppose you have any ideas for extra concepts for chapters comment here. Is there a POV you are curious to see? Or a different concept that would be good to see? Depending on the quality of the ideas they can be adapted to the next chapter. I'll save the good ideas for the next volume too. 

THANK YOU VERY MUCH. 

I love you <3 （〃｀ 3′〃）