reborn with a doom slayer gacha system in final fantasy 7

Well folks I'm taking a small break from posting a chapter for the series this week, but I will post next week(got a bit of writers block rn) but for now I have one or to questions.

Someone pointed out that I should kill human enemies, and while I do agree I figure I should ask everyone else.

And is my pacing right? I have a hard time with pacing and it doesn't hurt to ask.

The writers block should last till next week but till them I'll see you later