NOVEL NEXT Chapter 1: chapter 1
Chapter 1 ~
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Authour from the future~ I have rewritten this chapter completely, and you may find grammar differences in the next chapters, but I will try to rewrite every chapter.
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"Naruto, we will try to control the chakra of the Nine-Tails. Are you ready?" Jiraiya said to Naruto.
"Huh…" Naruto looked ahead, his gaze distant.
Before him stood a familiar face. He had seen this face countless times, not in person, but on TV. Naruto found himself facing the legendary Sannin, and his expression shifted through a range of emotions: from dazed to curious to understanding.
Jiraiya noticed the change in Naruto's demeanor. He couldn't quite pinpoint it, perhaps chalking it up to fatigue from their training, which had begun in the morning and stretched into the noon.
"Huh… Pervy-sage, I'm feeling tired. Can we postpone this training to tomorrow?" Naruto asked, his eyes meeting Jiraiya's.
"Sure, you can rest. We'll start training with the Nine-Tails' chakra tomorrow," Jiraiya replied, his gaze fixed on Naruto.
"You head back to the inn. I'm off to town for some research," Jiraiya added with a mischievous grin. A small drop of blood appeared on his nose, lost in thoughts that remained a mystery to others—though perhaps everyone could guess.
"I know what you get up to in the name of research. Do whatever you want. I'll be at the inn," Naruto said, his steps leading him toward the inn.
Jiraiya's gaze followed Naruto for a moment before he turned toward the town, a big, unsettling grin on his face. "The women in this town are just average, but they'll serve their purpose. Hehe… Now, let's go for a, ahem, research."
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Back to Naruto.
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Naruto entered the inn and found his room. Sliding the door open, he stepped inside. The room was simple, featuring a table at waist height for sitting, a bed, and gray flooring. It was a traditional Japanese-style room meant for accommodations.
He took a deep breath and let out a sigh.
"So, I really am in Naruto's body. God truly transmigrated me into Naruto," Naruto exclaimed with a wide grin.
"This is exactly what I wanted. Thank you, Truck-Kun, for giving me this chance. And thank you, God, for sending me into the Narutoverse." Naruto clapped his hands together in gratitude, thanking Truck-Kun and the deity.
"Now that this is settled, I'm training with Jiraiya. This is the time when Jiraiya trained Naruto for three years, preparing him to face the Akatsuki and find Sasuke… Ugh, forget about Sasuke. Let's focus on the challenges ahead of me," Naruto mused to himself.
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[System]
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Naruto whispered the command and a black screen materialized in his mind.
[Host, please wait for a moment. Your soul is merging with the body.]
"How long will it take, and what happens to the original soul of Naruto?" Naruto inquired about the system.
[Current merging progress: 10%.
Estimated time: Two hours.
your Soul will be merged with Naruto's soul]
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"Will anyone realize that I'm not the real Naruto? but New Naruto?"
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[Nah, no one will be able to identify that you're not the old Naruto. Not Kurama, not even the Sage of Six Paths.]
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"So, the 'boss' of the game won't be able to discern that I'm not the old Naruto. That's excellent. What about the memories of the real Naruto?"
[The memories of the real Naruto will become part of your consciousness after your soul merges with Naruto's soul and body.]
"Ah, I see. And what about his emotions? Will they influence me?"
[ Yes]
"Ok" he nodded. Now, System, show me the real you—the request I made to God."
[Apologies, host. This feature is currently unavailable. First, complete the merging of your soul. Afterward, you can fully access the system and whatever wishes God grants you.]
"Alright, so I need to wait for two hours"
[Yes.]
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"What should I do now?" Naruto pondered for a moment, surveying his surroundings.
"Let's go outside and behold the new world I've yearned for."
Naruto stood up and left the inn, embarking on a stroll toward the town.
He took a deep breath, relishing the refreshing and pure air. "No wonder people here live longer. This air is invigorating."
Navigating through the town, he encountered various stalls—some large, some small—offering a diverse array of goods.
As he glanced at the stalls, Naruto noted how no one treated him with hostility, a stark contrast to the treatment he often received in the anime. "Perhaps I'm not in Konoha anymore," he contemplated as he continued to explore the town.
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An hour passed, and a message echoed in his mind.
*Ding!*
[Soul merging progress: 50%.
Estimated time: 1 hour.]
Naruto felt a growing sense of control over his body, along with the gradual resurfacing of memories from Naruto's childhood.
"This is quite different from what I read in fanfiction. Memories don't flood back all at once, causing unbearable headaches," Naruto reflected.
"Well, that's a relief."
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[Author's Note: If you enjoyed this first chapter, please leave a comment and add it to your library. Stay tuned for more in this story; it's bound to be epic.
And another request, please comment on every chapter, it will help me write more...]