Naruto: Isekai Saiyajin

Chapter 4: MHA?



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The dust from the attack settles in the arena, revealing in addition to the combatants a member of the ANBU with a mask resembling a cat's face, covered in green and red markings, and a red tattoo on his left shoulder.

'Is that Yamato?' Saruhiko thought, while sitting outside the arena.

The arena floor was littered with rock fragments. They belonged to a stone wall that the ANBU had summoned to protect Kiba, who was still on the ground.

"Iruka-sensei," said the masked shinobi, turning to the fight referee. "By virtue of my meddling to assist Genin Inuzuka Kiba, victory must be given to Uzumaki Naruto."

Iruka blinked, eyes wide with surprise still written on his face. Naruto's attack echoed in his mind, the impact resonating through the silence.

"Winner is Uzumaki Naruto!" he declared, ending the silence in the arena.

His voice cut through the air, clear and decisive. The murmur of the crowd grew, a sea of amazed and awed faces. Naruto, panting raised his head, sweat running down his forehead, and smiled satisfied with the victory resulting from his effort.

The audience applauded restrainedly, simply acknowledging the blonde ninja's victory but without excitement.

Among the spectators, Inuzuka Tsume, Kiba's mother, growled, frustrated with the audience's weak reaction, and turned to Kushina.

"Don't worry about those idiots," she began, her voice firm yet gentle. "They are just surprised at the level of power Naruto has demonstrated. You should be proud of him."

Despite the praise for her son, Kushina did not respond.

"Kushina?" Tsume said, trying to get the redhead's attention.

Wide-eyed, Kushina just muttered,

"Minato's jutsu."

Hearing the statement, Tsume turned to the arena and faced the still-celebrating orange ninja.

"Oh yeah… Minato was the one who created the Rasengan," the matriarch said, snapping her fingers. "You must have trained a lot with your boys for him to be able to use such a complex jutsu at such a young age, right?"

"I didn't teach him," Kushina responded, placing her hands on the top of the rock wall that separated her from the arena. "But I'm going to choke whoever taught him that without talking to me first." The redhead finished her speech by crunching the stone under her hands.

Giving an awkward laugh, Tsume moved away from the Uzumaki matriarch and approached Inuzuka Hana, her daughter.

"I feel sorry for the poor guy who's going to deal with her," Tsume commented to her daughter.

"It's just a normal reaction for a mother hen like her. She'll probably calm down after the fight," said Hana in a calm tone.

"Maybe you are right," Tsume agreed, looking at her son being helped out of the arena. "Remind me to triple his and Akamaru's training."

"It's not fair to compare Kiba to his opponent," Hana said, turning to her mother. "Training is always good, but don't use Naruto as a parameter," the daughter continued, worried about her younger brother's fate. "With that level of power, Naruto could defeat half of Konoha's Chunin in one-on-one combat."

The Inuzuka matriarch scratched her chin, analyzing what her daughter had said.

"You're right…" the mother said in a despondent tone.

From the corner of her eye, Tsume noticed Hana smiling, proud of having won the small argument with her mother. Not wanting to leave her daughter with too much pride, the matriarch smiled mischievously when an idea popped into her mind.

"So… the blonde is the Uzumaki you're dating?"

Hana's eyes widened, her face instantly blushing.

"Mother!" she exclaimed at Tsume's shameless question. "It's not him."

Tsume raised an eyebrow, a mischievous smile playing on her lips.

"So who's the lucky one?"

Hana looked away, her cheeks still red.

"It's Saruhiko, Mom. He is interested in me, not dating me."

The answer hung in the air, and Tsume tilted her head, curious.

"The monkey boy?" questioned the matriarch, looking at the side of the arena. "Usually dogs and monkeys don't get along… but if he's as strong as his brother at that age, I'll allow you to date him."

"Mom, stop," Hana pleaded, embarrassed.

"After all, it's no small feat for a 12-year-old boy to be able to 'defeat half of Konoha's Chunin,'" said the matriarch, repeating her daughter's earlier comment.

"Seriously, stop it," begged the embarrassed daughter.

"Just let the boy get a little older…" commented Tsume, opening a big smile that made her daughter's spine shiver. "Before you make puppies with him."

"MOM!" the daughter screamed in horror.

The mother laughed loudly at her daughter's suffering, but after calming down, she fell silent to Hana's relief.

'I'm glad this matter is over,' Hana thought, breathing in relief. 'Nothing against Saruhiko, but the boy is too young.'

N:IS

In Saruhiko's opinion, the following fights proceed monotonously. He observed each fight with a critical eye, analyzing the Genins' movements and strategies. Most of them were characters from another graduating class of Genins that he didn't remember from the series. From what he saw, these "extras" would not pass the secret tests with their Jounins.

'They will end up being enlisted in that army of Genins they have in the war arc,' Saruhiko thinks while watching another boring fight. 'The only interesting thing here is the extra members of the Nara, Aburame, and Yamanaka clans. Probably students who would have died in the Kyuubi's attack in the original canon without my intervention as Oozaru, but they aren't much of a big deal either…'

Sasuke defeated Choji so quickly that even Iruka was surprised. Ino took control of Sakura's body and made her surrender. Shikamaru, in turn, surrendered as soon as the fight with Shino began, saying that insects were 'a drag'.

"What a snoozefest," Saruhiko murmurs boredly in a low tone so no one else can hear. "Since the original canon was changed, I was hoping for some dramatic revelation to shake things up."

"Next fight!" Iruka announces out loud. "Hyuuga Hinata vs. Toshinori Yagi."

"No way," Saruhiko mutters, eyes widening.

The young ninja was shocked by Hinata's opponent, but not just because he had the same name as MHA's All Might. Saruhiko recognized Toshinori Yagi, even though he was a younger and a happier version than in the original series.

'Sai?' murmured Saruhiko, confused.

The young ninja is left with a jaw-dropping, his eyes fixed on the boy who has just entered the arena. The similarity is undeniable.

Pondering in silence, Saruhiko's mind works overtime to make sense of the situation.

'Maybe his parents survived the fox attack. If this is true, Sai would not become an orphan; as a consequence, he would have stayed out of Danzo's reach,' reasons the young ninja.

In the arena, Hinata's opponent approaches and does a small bow before Iruka can begin the fight.

"I wish Hyuuga-san a good fight, and may the best one win," comments Yagi, smiling like All Might in his golden age.

Embarrassed, Hinata only responds by nodding her head.

'This Sai is much more smiling and sociable than the original,' the young ninja reasons mentally. 'Danzo's lack of influence would explain the difference in personality.'

"Hajime!" Iruka shouts, and the fight begins.

Hinata moves forward quickly. Toshinori Yagi, noticing the approach, tries to move away, pulling a parchment and a brush from his robes.

Yep! He is Sai,' Saruhiko thinks, sure of the boy's identity.

Toshinori Yagi's eyes narrow, focused on the parchment, as he channels chakra into the brush. But before the young ninja could put the ink on the parchment, something connects with his diaphragm.

"Shoutei!"

Hinata's voice echoes across the arena, along with her palm that hits Toshinori. The impact is solid, and Toshinori is thrown backward, parchment and brush flying from his hands. He falls to the ground outside the arena, an expression of pain and surprise on his face.

"Wow!" Naruto mocks. "What a weakling."

"That was quick," Saruhiko mutters. "He didn't even get a chance to use a jutsu."

Iruka sighs tiredly, feeling pity for the young man's quick defeat.

"Winner is Hyuuga Hinata."

Hinata returns to her seat, breathing a sigh of relief from her quick victory. Naruto, without hesitation, approaches her, a genuine smile on his face.

"Hinata, you were amazing!" the blonde ninja says. "You were super quick and strong."

Hinata feels the heat rising up her neck, her cheeks burning. The proximity of Naruto, her secret crush, leaves the shy girl speechless.

"T-thank you, Naruto."

She can barely look at him, her heart beating so hard it seems to echo throughout the arena. Naruto, oblivious to Hinata's inner turmoil, continues, his eyes shining with excitement.

"You know, I was thinking... If we could choose teams, I would love to have you on mine. You're super strong and always do your best. I think we would make an amazing team together!"

Naruto's words hit Hinata like a tsunami. She tries to respond, but the words get stuck in her throat. The world around her begins to spin, and before she knows it, everything goes dark.

Hinata faints, her body falling limply next to the arena. Naruto, surprised, tries to hold her back, but it's too late. He looks at her, confused and worried.

"Hinata? Hinata, are you okay?"

Saruhiko smiles happily, certain that Naruto and Hinata's ship has a strong chance of happening.

'I wouldn't forgive myself if Naruto ends up with Sakura,' Saruhiko thinks, shaking all over.

"Let's start the last fight of the day!" Iruka announces loudly. "Uzumaki Saruhiko—"

"FINALLY!" Saruhiko shouts, cutting Iruka off, jumping up and leaping into the arena.

Standing, the young ninja notices that everyone is looking at him with irritated expressions. In the middle of the arena, Iruka glares at him.

"Oops!" Saruhiko exclaims, realizing what he had done. "My bad."

"Patience, Iruka," the sensei says to himself, massaging his forming headache. "After today, he's someone else's problem."

Facing him again, without being able to refute his teacher, Saruhiko just laughs awkwardly.

"Uzumaki Saruhiko versus Akimichi Bakugo!"

'Another MHA name?' Saruhiko questions mentally.

On the other side of the seated students, a member of the Akimichi clan with a big belly and thick muscular arms stands up. Saruhiko's opponent is taller than all the students, practically the size of an adult. His blonde hair is long, greasy, and unkempt, tied back. A few hair of a mustache under his nose reveal that he is older than the other students.

"Oss!" the young ninja opponent shouts while stomping into the arena.

Saruhiko, without being intimidated, looks at his opponent and laughs aside.

"Where have you been this whole time?" the young ninja says, facing his great opponent. "You're like a Choji who ate another Choji for breakfast."

Bakugo looks at Saruhiko, irritated, and grits his teeth.

"Don't compare me to that weakling coward," Bakugo grumbles. "Just because he is the heir, everyone in the clan treats him in a special way. Today I'll show that I am stronger and worthy of being the heir."

Saruhiko shrugs, unconcerned.

"I don't care much about your family's politics." He stares at Bakugo, a teasing smile on his lips. "But I bet you're a repeater."

Bakugo, already irritated, clenches his fists.

"You talk too much, Uzumaki."

Iruka, noticing the growing tension, puts himself between the two and begins the fight.

"Hajime!"

Bakugo wastes no time, channeling chakra into his hands as he performs a screaming seal.

"Baika no Jutsu: Ude!"

His right arm inflates, growing enormously. The sleeve of his clothing rips, unable to contain the sudden surge. The skin of the giant arm turns red, veins standing out, pulsing with chakra. Bakugo lunges forward, his giant arm outstretched, trying to grab Saruhiko.

Unfazed, Saruhiko calmly watches the hand closing in and trapping him.

"I would love to crush you!" Bakugo declares, smiling triumphantly. "But I'm content to throw you out of the arena."

Bakugo tried to lift his arm, but he couldn't.

"Um?" Bakugo grumbles, frustrated.

His muscles tense, veins stand out, but his arm is immovable. He grinds his teeth, sweat dripping down his forehead. On the second try, he realizes that Saruhiko is too heavy.

"That's impossible!" Bakugo exclaims, his voice full of frustration. "I can lift 1.000 kg(2.205 lbs) rocks with one hand!"

From inside the hand, a mocking laugh echoes. The laugh is filled with an arrogant confidence that makes everyone present uncomfortable. Bakugo, feeling cold sweat running down his forehead, tries to maintain his composure, but he feels a strange pressure increasing from inside his hand.

"W-What's going on?" Bakugo mutters, his voice shaking.

The giant hand begins to shake, the fingers slowly opening as if an invisible force is pulling them. Bakugo tries to resist, his muscles tensing, but it's useless. Saruhiko, from inside the hand, pushes the fingers apart with surprising ease.

"I wanted to see if you could lift me up," says Saruhiko, stopping his laughter. "But it won't happen. After all, I have 2.000kg(4.410 lbs) on each leg." He concludes his statement by kicking the giant hand away.

Bakugo screams, eyes wide with surprise and fear.

"Liar! There's no way you can have all that on each leg!"

Saruhiko, with a teasing smile, lifts the hem of his pants, revealing an intricate seal on each leg. The seals glow with a soft light, pulsing with chakra. The entire arena holds its breath, eyes fixed on the seals.

"Who do you think I am?" Saruhiko asks, his voice full of disdain. "An idiot repeater who can't make Genin?"

Bakugo, still in disbelief, shakes his head.

"That's... That's impossible. You're a monster!"

Saruhiko laughs, a cold, arrogant sound.

"Bitch, please! If you want to see a real monster, I know someone. He's a lot stronger than me, carries a lot more weight, and is only a year older."

Bakugo's eyes widen even more, disbelief mixed with a hint of curiosity.

"But let's cut the hat!" Saruhiko says, cutting off Bakugo's thoughts. "If that's all you have, I'll end this fight now." The young ninja concludes by assuming a fighting stance.

Bakugo, furious, reaches into his pocket and pulls out a transparent box. Inside are three pills: one green, one yellow, and one red. Saruhiko's eyes narrow, recognizing them instantly. They are the secret pills of the Akimichi clan, each offering a boost of power with a devastating effect.

"I WON'T LOSE!" Bakugo shouts, swallowing the green and yellow pills.

Saruhiko watches in amazement at the unexpected action. Before the young ninja can question his opponent's sanity, Bakugo's body begins to tremble, chakra visibly pulsing beneath his skin.

"Are you crazy?" Saruhiko murmurs, eyes wide. "This will kill you!"

Bakugo, ignoring the warning, performs the hand seal again.

"Baika no Jutsu: Zettai!"

Bakugo's body inflates enormously. Muscles expand, skin turns red, and veins stand out, pulsing with an absurd amount of chakra. In a matter of seconds, he transforms into a 10-meter-tall giant, his head almost touching the roof of the arena.

The crowd holds its breath, eyes wide with astonishment. Iruka, worried, takes a step forward, but is stopped by a stern look from the Hokage. With a subtle nod, Sarutobi indicates that the fight must continue.

Saruhiko, regaining his composure, observes the giant in front of him. The size difference is absurd, but he is not intimidated. Instead, a teasing smile forms on his lips once more.

"So we're going to play 'Shadows of the Colossus'?"

"DIE!" Bakugo shouts, raising his foot to stomp on Saruhiko.

Before Bakugo's foot can reach him, Saruhiko pulls a storage scroll from his pocket. As he unrolls it, a coil of rope with a climbing hook tied to its end appears in a small white cloud. The rope is thick and strong, perfect for what Saruhiko has in mind.

Saruhiko jumps, avoiding Bakugo's devastating stomp. While still in the air, he launches the rope's hook with precision, snagging it on the giant's shirt collar. The rope stretches, tense, but Saruhiko doesn't climb it. Instead, he swings, using the momentum to keep himself out of reach of Bakugo's giant hands.

"Now it's 'Attack on Titan'!" Saruhiko shouts, laughing.

Bakugo, furious, tries to grab Saruhiko, but the young ninja is too fast. He swings from side to side, the rope squeaking with tension. The arena watches, mouths agape, as Saruhiko dodges Bakugo's clumsy attacks, screaming like a cowboy at a rodeo.

"YEEHAW!"

With each swing, Saruhiko gets closer to Bakugo's face. The giant, frustrated, tries to hit Saruhiko with slaps, but the young ninja manages to avoid them, laughing and provoking Bakugo even more.

Bakugo roars, frustration evident on his face. He tries to grab the rope, but Saruhiko swings behind him, landing on the giant's shoulder.

"Do you know what sucks when you are a giant?" Saruhiko asks, unrolling another storage scroll. "The human body's weak points are bigger than a melon." Saruhiko concludes, as a two-handed sledgehammer materializes in his hands.

Before Bakugo can turn his face away, Saruhiko hammers the side of his skull. The impact is brutal, the sledgehammer striking the spot just next to the ear. Despite his giant form, Bakugo feels excruciating pain. His face contorts, his eyes widen, and a scream of agony escapes his lips.

"How does a guy that big take so much damage from one hit?" Naruto questions from the side of the arena.

Next to him, Hinata, who had just woken up from fainting, explains what just happened.

"Saruhiko hit the temporomandibular joint," Hinata says, her voice still low. "It's a very sensitive region because it involves muscles, ligaments, cartilage, and nerves. Just pressing your finger there causes pain and discomfort—imagine a sledgehammer strike."

Naruto, eyes wide with surprise and awe.

"Wow, Hinata, you know a lot about this kind of stuff," Naruto comments, impressed.

Hinata blushes, looking away.

"I... I study a lot about human anatomy. It helps with training and fights."

In the arena, Bakugo staggers, the intense pain causing him to lose balance. Saruhiko seizes the opportunity, jumping off the giant's shoulder and landing on the ground. He turns sharply, facing his next target.

"I even remember the name of this one," the young ninja says, leaping to attack the side of Bakugo's knee. "Peroneal nerve."

Saruhiko strikes true, the sledgehammer colliding with the nerve. The impact is devastating, searing pain spreading through Bakugo's body. Bakugo roars—a guttural, primal sound that echoes throughout the arena. His huge body staggers, his knees giving out. He tries to remain upright, but the pain is unbearable. With a deafening crash, Bakugo collapses to the ground, the impact making the arena shake.

Sweat drips down Bakugo's forehead, his eyes wide with pain and shock. He tries to get up, but every movement sends waves of agony through his body. Saruhiko, still wielding the sledgehammer, watches his fallen opponent with a serious expression.

"It was a good fight, but you won't be able to get up, and the medicine you took will start to screw you up soon," Saruhiko says in a tone of level-headed honesty he rarely uses. "So just give up, man."

Bakugo, his face contorted in pain, stares at Saruhiko with withering hatred. He takes a deep breath, his teeth clenched, and spits out his words, filled with venom.

"I will never surrender… especially not to the monkey adopted by that red-haired bitch."

Silence falls over the arena, heavy and suffocating. All eyes turn to Saruhiko, waiting for his reaction. The young ninja, who had maintained a confident and provocative expression until then, freezes. His eyes widen, his pupils dilate, and a shockwave seems to run through his body. The sledgehammer in his hands falls to the ground with a dull thud.

Bakugo, still lying on the ground, lets out a laugh full of malice and triumph.

"Did you finally shut your mouth, you monkey?" Bakugo sneers. "And to think I only needed to go after your mommy to throw you off balance."

Finally coming out of his trance, Saruhiko frowns and raises his hand, palm open.

"Fuuuck…" Naruto mutters worriedly, watching his brother.

A sphere of chakra begins to form in Saruhiko's hand, glowing with an orange hue. Bakugo, noticing the technique, stops laughing, his eyebrows arching in confusion.

"Naruto's jutsu?" Hinata asks curiously.

"It's different," Naruto replies, his gaze fixed on the scene. "That jutsu is Saruhiko's tactic to complete the Rasengan."

"You mean it's an unfinished jutsu?" Hinata mutters.

Naruto nods.

"To do the Rasengan, you need to control your chakra with rotation, power, and containment," Naruto explains seriously. "To make the full version, you need to transform the chakra into one of the five natures."

"But the Rasengan itself is a complex technique that few can perform," Hinata adds, impressed.

"That's why no one has completed the jutsu yet—not even Saruhiko," Naruto says.

Hinata looks back at the arena, confused, where it seems like Saruhiko is proving Naruto wrong. Noticing her confusion, Naruto continues explaining.

"What Saruhiko is using is a technique he created to train elemental control and chakra control at the same time," Naruto points out, gesturing toward Saruhiko's hand. "This jutsu eliminates some of the Rasengan's raw power and adds chakra nature transformation, creating a simplified version of the 'complete Rasengan' we're trying to achieve."

Hinata's eyes widen in surprise at Saruhiko's strategic mind. For her, Saruhiko had never seemed like a genius in school, despite his decent grades. He only ever studied enough to pass the year.

"Why didn't he work harder on his grades?" Hinata murmurs curiously.

"'School's a pain in the ass, but if you need help with that shit, just ask me,'" Naruto says, mimicking his brother's mocking tone. "His words, not mine."

While Hinata laughs shyly, entertained by the Uzumaki brothers' dynamic, in the arena, the sphere in Saruhiko's hand shifts from orange to reddish yellow.

"We can't expect God to do everything alone," Saruhiko mutters, his anger bubbling up at Bakugo's insult to his new life mother.

He points the sphere at Bakugo and shouts for all to hear.

"KATON!" The sphere compresses in energy. "BIG BANG ATTACK!"

The flaming chakra sphere shoots from Saruhiko's hand toward Bakugo. Fallen and motionless, Bakugo has no way to dodge.

Everyone holds their breath, eyes fixed on the red-hot projectile.

But before the attack connects, two masked shinobi jump in front of Bakugo. Both make seals with their hands—one of them summons a powerful column of water that rises from the ground, while the other simultaneously creates a stone wall behind the water, reinforcing the defense.

The flaming sphere collides with the water, hissing and shrinking in size, only to then hit the stone wall behind it, absorbing the remainder of the attack.

The wall cracks but does not break.

"Winner is Uzumaki Saruhiko!" Iruka declares, ending the fight.

The audience remains silent, the air thick with tension. Everyone's eyes focus on Saruhiko, who takes a deep breath, trying to control the anger still boiling inside him. He knows the last thing his family needs is a bad reputation for being out-of-control killers. To divert attention from the heavy atmosphere, he decides to do what he does best: show off.

"Well, looks like we put on quite a show, huh?" Saruhiko says loudly. He turns to the audience, arms open in a dramatic gesture. "I know what you're thinking, 'How did these two Uzumakis do this? I don't remember them being so strong.'"

The audience murmurs curiously, some laughing softly, others still tense. Naruto, next to Hinata, watches his brother with a mixture of admiration and embarrassment. He knows Saruhiko is trying to lighten the mood, but he also feels his brother is about to do something embarrassing.

"The truth is that Naruto and I will become the strongest ninjas in this village," Saruhiko continues, his voice full of confidence. "Naruto is going to be the next Hokage, and I... am going to be the next Shinobi no Kami!"

The audience explodes with laughter and applause. The tension begins to dissipate, replaced by a lighter, more upbeat energy. Naruto smiles, shaking his head.

Although the audience took the comment as an exaggerated joke, Naruto knows that Saruhiko is as serious about becoming the next Shinobi no Kami as he is about becoming Hokage.

"Having said that…" Saruhiko says, changing his tone to the mocking one he always uses, "The life of a Shinobi no Kami can be very lonely, so I would like the single women in the audience to raise their hands for me and-."

"SARUHIKO!" A voice full of maternal fury roars. "I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WANT TO HIT ON ALL THE GIRLS IN THE VILLAGE, YOU ERO-SARU!"

Kushina stands, her red hair waving like flaming serpents, controlled by her fury. Her eyes shine with an intensity that makes even the most experienced shinobi cringe.

"Calm down, Mom," Saruhiko says, his hands raised in a placating gesture. "For Naruto's and my sake."

Caught off guard by the statement, Kushina's anger evaporates when Saruhiko mentions his and his brother's well-being.

"After all… what kind of girl would want an angry mother-in-law like you?"

The audience laughs at the black-haired Uzumaki's joke. Kushina takes a deep breath, focusing her attention on her son. The fury in her eyes is palpable, and everyone in the arena knows she won't let this slide.

"Uzumaki Saruhiko," Kushina says, her voice filled with a frightening calm. "You have exactly three seconds to apologize."

Saruhiko, realizing that the situation is about to explode, tries to explain himself.

"Mom, it was just a joke," Saruhiko says, his tone more serious than usual.

"One…"

"I didn't mean to offend anyone. I was just trying to lighten the mood."

"Two…"

"Are you really going to spank me in front of the whole village?"

...

"Three!" she exclaims, jumping toward the arena.

With a nimble leap, she lands in the arena, her red hair flying behind her like a battle flag. Saruhiko, realizing the imminent threat, wastes no time. He turns and runs, screaming for help.

"HELP!" Saruhiko shouts, desperate, as he runs across the arena. "I'm too beautiful and single to die!"

"SHUT UP, ERO-SARU!"

(#)End of chapter!(#)

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