My Cartoonist Guide

Chapter 47 Modified ideas

“Don’t rewrite the new script? What are you going to do?” Jiyin asked in surprise.

Xi Muxin looked at Shen Xin puzzledly.

“For the sake of Xiao Xin’s face, I will make an exception and talk about my thoughts. Isn’t there four female characters in the first part? Three of them are students and one student is a teacher. Two more are drawn from the following chapters. Girls form a club, and the only teacher can act as an instructor.”

“What’s the difference between this and what Xiao Ming said?” Ji Yinxuan wondered.

Xi Muxin nodded repeatedly, she also wanted to know the difference between the two.

“Of course there is a difference. The purpose of creating a society is different. What Xiao Xin said is to create a society for the purpose of dating. They and the protagonist did not know each other before, but the purpose of the society I was talking about was to compete for the male lead. I’ve known the male lead from the beginning. Everyone wants to associate with the male lead, but they don’t want to give others a chance.”

“Wait…If this is the case, the text written by Su Han can be applied to this framework. It is necessary to delete some characters and content related to them, and then rearrange and add branch tasks for the game.” Ji Yinxuan suddenly realized. “In this case, it can really shorten the time to organize the script. Shen Xin, you really have a better idea.”

Xi Muxin blinked, looking confused.

“Is this reformation of Brother Xin just to shorten the time to modify the script?”

“Of course there is more than that. The most important point of the method Shen Xin said is to give players a sense of substitution. The game we are doing this time is galgame, and the target players are boys. If it’s the kind of proposal you said , Several outstanding girls have formed a club because they have never been in love, and then choose a boy as the love partner. If you are that boy, how would you feel?” Ji Yinxuan asked.

“Lucky…Should this sense of luck be passed on to the player?”

“Yes, it can be passed to the player-yes,’I’ became her boyfriend because of luck. But at the same time, the’player’ may also have another idea that’I’ is a test product. They It was for trying to fall in love that I found me, not for other reasons.

“Shen Xin’s idea does not have this many worries. The reason why so many beautiful girls form a club is because of’I’, and everything they do is to make’me’ happy and win’me’. If you It’s this boy, doesn’t it feel different?”

Ji Yinxuan’s cheeks were rosy and her eyes glowed.

This is her biggest mood swing tonight, the reason is that the game has new ideas.

Xi Muxin nodded slowly, “It seems to be the same thing, and there is indeed a sense of vanity in my heart. Brother Xin, how did you think of writing this way?”

Shen Xin rolled his eyes. I am also an Internet writer anyway. Although I am only a third-rate, I still know some basic points.

“In the script written by Su Han, the number of characters on the stage should be greatly reduced, and the events related to the characters can be retained and used as a branch of the game to be spread on other characters.” Shen Xin reminded Ji Yinxuan.

“That’s right.” Ji Yinxuan nodded, “This is better than what I said. You only need to adjust the structure of the story, and make small-scale adjustments. You should be able to adjust the story up to a month. Wait for the script to be written. Okay, let’s set the character again. In this way, I will go to the editor-in-chief and communicate with him about the person setting. If he disagrees, I will proceed from the loopholes in the contract.”

“You don’t have to be so troublesome? Just draw a few sketches, and you can just leave it alone at that time.” Shen Xin waved his hand.

“No!” Ji Yinxuan categorically denied Shen Xin’s statement, “Personal design is very important to the production of the game. I don’t allow such an important role, because of a leaky contract, I was forced to move behind the scenes. And, for you, this fame is also very important, right?”

Shen Xin silently.

For a manga artist, reputation is the guarantee of manga sales. Only by letting more people know your name can you have a chance to sell manga.

“So, don’t worry about this matter, I will definitely arrange it.” Ji Yinxuan did not give Shen Xin a chance to interrupt, and directly finalized the matter. “But I am looking for cooperation in the negotiation of “NewWorld”, maybe I have to postpone it a little bit. After all, the text hasn’t come out yet, and I’m not very good at negotiating.”

Shen Xin nodded. After all, he decided to deny cooperating with Ji Yinxuan after reading the script. Therefore, Ji Yinxuan’s approach is better for both parties.

Seeing that Shen Xin and Ji Yinxuan have finalized the cooperation, only some details have not been discussed, Xi Muxing is a little anxious.

“Wait… Brother Xin, say that, am I useless?”

Huh?

Shen Xin and Ji Yinxuan looked at Xi Muxin’s faces with puzzles.

“Just delete a few characters, and then add the scenes of the deleted characters to other characters. Anyone can do these things, right?” Xi Muxing was unhappy.

Ji Yinxuan shook her head repeatedly.

“Of course not. The point you just said is correct, because Xiao Su has never been in love, so the character creation is very unsuccessful. When facing the male protagonist, he can’t grasp the feeling of being in love at all. —The character is too sensible, it should be related to her good at mystery novels.

“I need to reflect the content of love in the text. The character of the character also determines the image of the character. As a cartoonist, Shen Xin should be able to understand how important the character is?”

Shen Xin nodded. Although he knew that this would increase the workload of Xi Muxin a lot, what Ji Yinxuan said was the truth.

“Really?” Xi Muxin’s eyes brightened again, and there was even some joy in his heart.

“But the scrutiny of the script is an iterative process. Sometimes a character may be remembered by readers because of a sentence. Therefore, I hope you will be prepared to change the script. But rest assured, I will also help. . Don’t worry.” Ji Yinxuan comforted.

“I…no problem.” Xi Muxun clenched his fists, “I should…no, I must be able to write a good script. However, Brother Xin, when you say those girls form a club for the purpose of’competing for the male lead’,” I was thinking about a question, since the heroines all like the male protagonists, and they should be enemies to each other, then why do they even form a club?

“Eh?”

Shen Xin was taken aback, he just said casually, never thought about this problem.

“Yes, I want to know too.” Ji Yinxuan asked seriously.

“Well…” Shen Xin wiped the sweat from his forehead. How did I know, I just thought it would be fun.

“Of course, there must be a reason…” Shen Xin’s mind spins quickly.

“Hmm.” Xi Muxin nodded, like a good student listening carefully.

“For example… That’s right!” Shen Xin snapped his fingers, UU Reading www.uukanshu.com “For example, because of the protagonist, they repeatedly caused uproar in the school. In order to ensure the tranquility of the school, the principal felt that a few of them should form a club. , Can only be active in a certain area, which is better for other students.”

After 　　 finished speaking, Shen Xin secretly admired himself for being able to correct the loophole in such a short time.

“Is this okay?” Xi Muxin looked incredible.

“No problem. Unless it is a reasoning game, other types, such as development games, can have small logical loopholes. Shen Xin’s idea seems to be telling a joke, but it does work.” Ji Yinxuan nodded Said.

“Okay, that’s it for today.” Shen Xin stood up from the sofa, “The follow-up thing is your business. Please don’t contact me again until the script comes out.”

“Yes, it’s late, I should go back.” Ji Yinxuan stood up and bowed slightly to Shen Xin and Xi Muxin.

“Is your housekeeper back?” Shen Xin asked.

“It doesn’t matter, I just need to contact her. As for the contract, I respect what you mean. After a few days, I will bring the contract and clarify the pros and cons. If you think this is a constraint, you don’t need to sign it. , But it should be your benefit, and I will never be in arrears.” When Ji Yinxuan just walked out the door, like two people said.

Shen Xin nodded slightly. The contract is a guarantee of the interests of both parties, but some people really don’t like signing contracts. Therefore, Ji Yinxuan is indeed asking for their opinions.

“Since it involves business matters, should I sign the contract? When there is a problem, it is easy to talk.” Shen Xin said.

“Okay, then we will see you in a few days.”

Shen Xin sent Ji Yinxuan out of the community, until Ji Yinxuan got in the car and turned home.