My Cartoonist Guide

Su Han’s game text

[Episode 41-44 has been revised. It is recommended that those who have read the previous novel before July 14th read it again, because there will be some differences. 】

When Xi Muxin saw Ji Yinxuan who was following Shen Xin and entering the living room, the book in his hand fell to the ground with a “click”, his mouth opened slightly, and he was speechless in surprise.

After Ji Yinxuan nodded slightly to Xi Muxin, she sat on the sofa, but the little girl was still at a loss. Finally, under Shen Xin’s reminder, she remembered the guests at home and quickly made a cup of black tea for Ji Yinxuan.

came to the kitchen, Xi Muxin secretly asked Xiang Shen Xin: “Brother, who is this girl? So pretty.”

“She? The student council president of Yunhai University.” Shen Xin took out a bottle of mineral water from the refrigerator.

“The president of the student council? What did she do here? Did you get caught for what? She didn’t come to visit her home, right?” Xi Muxin said in a panic.

“What are you talking nonsense? She wants me to make a character for her game.” Shen Xin said casually.

“Then why bring her here?” Xi Muxin bulged his cheeks, somewhat unsatisfied.

“These things can’t be discussed in the studio, right?” Shen Xin asked.

Xi Muxin blinked, and Shen Xin seemed to be right.

put the teacup in front of Ji Yinxuan, and Xi Muxing immediately moved onto the couch next to her.

After Ji Yinxuan said “thank you”, she lifted her teacup gracefully and took a sip.

Shen Xin sat down and put the file bag on the table, “Okay, can you read the text of the game now, right?”

Ji Yinxuan nodded slightly, “Please.”

Xi Muxin also leaned over, looking at the text in Shen Xin’s hand eagerly.

“What’s wrong?” Shen Xin asked puzzled.

“No, I just want to take a look.” Xi Muxin said with interest.

“This is a love script.” Shen Xin reminded.

“Oh, I have been reading romance novels recently, and I also watched “Y’s”. Isn’t it also romance?” Chi Muying asked.

That’s really the case.

Shen Xin scratched his head, and the love novel that Yan sister brought was almost read by the little girl.

Ji Yinxuan raised her head and looked at Xi Muxin, feeling a little surprised, then lowered her head and looked at the black tea in her hands.

Shen Xin stopped arguing with Xi Muxin, and focused on the text, while Xi Muxin’s eyes were fixed on the script.

“”The Trouble of Choice”?”

Shen Xin read the title lightly, feeling that the title of the book is not good. He prefers this line of words to be the title of a chapter rather than the title of the book.

Then, Shen Xin turned over the title page, and together with Xi Muxun, they scanned the text quickly.

Different books have different reading methods.

Books like 　　 classics need to be “chewed slowly”, while online novels don’t need to be so elaborate.

The text of the game is slightly different from the online novel, but Shen Xin just wants to know the outline of the story, and only seeks to understand the meaning of it, so the page turning speed is very fast.

Before crossing, Shen Xin read a lot of online novels. Basically, he can read over a million words a day. The reading speed is very fast. Of course, this is also due to the “irrigation method” of online novels, and one or two chapters less. Nothing is missing at all.

I remember that some authors missed a chapter and apologized back to the readers. The reader said, it doesn’t matter, the rhythm is just right. This makes the author very embarrassed.

For about half an hour, Shen Xin looked at the main idea of ​​the text seven or seven eighty-eight. Xi Muxin took the text from Shen Xin and continued to sort out the text flow.

At first, Shen Xin felt that the title of the book was not good, but now I have to admit that the title of the book still matches the story.

In the game, the character controlled by the player is an ordinary high school boy, but he has an enviable luck. The male protagonist and his childhood sweetheart’s female neighbor are classmates, the same table is the male protagonist’s favorite girl, his fiancee is the student council president, and the head teacher is the same female character as the eldest sister next door. With so many girls appearing in the first episode, isn’t it just a troublesome choice.

Only in the first part of the game, there are four girls who are closely related to the male protagonist. As a galgame, Shen Xin thinks that this number should be fine. Players’ different choices in the game will affect the favorability of different characters, so that they can choose different side missions and achieve different endings. This part also requires a lot of text. At the same time, the length of the game can also be controlled within an appropriate range.

Shen Xin then picked up the “role setting”.

The character setting is very thin, only five or six pages. After turning a page or two, Shen Xin suddenly felt that something was wrong. He quickly turned over the character setting and counted the number of characters on it. There was a black line.

There are 11 characters in this game. Except for the male protagonist, the rest are all girls, and most of them are around 15 or 16 years old.

“Senior sister, what does the following text look like?” Shen Xin asked Ji Yinxuan.

“Similar to this part.” Ji Yinxuan raised her head, but her eyes were a little faint, “What do you think of the text.”

“To be honest, it’s not very good. If you want me to paint, you’d better change the script, at least it will satisfy me. If you don’t want to change the script, then you can find another person to set the character. Sorry.” Shen Xinyi Face apologetic.

“Is it really bad?” Ji Yinxuan asked quickly.

“Senior elder sister is also a person who has played games. Even if it is a galgame game, she should have more contact than me. There are ten female protagonists in a galgame, and the settings are similar, and there is no new sense. At least, the character, appearance, and origin of the characters ……These should be different? Cute, arrogant, quiet, and indifferent… There should be one for every type of female character, so that the player will only think about the “Second Week” after one of the characters in the “Raiders”. ‘, Raiders other characters.”

To be honest, Shen Xin was a little depressed.

After 　　 crossed, in his field of vision, the author who appeared most frequently was Su Han. “Toggle” is acceptable, after all, anti-traveling rarely appears in this world, and it is considered an innovation, and “Crimination” allows Shen Xin to connect her with the big field thrush.

Therefore, he also has high expectations for this text.

Ji Yinxuan’s previous attitude has actually told Shen Xin that there may be problems with this work, but he still has a fluke mentality, but he did not expect it to be like this It is indeed the case. “Ji Yinxuan’s eyes were faint, she held up her teacup, and took a sip of her tea, “I can also see that these things are more like novels than game text. But it’s okay for me to type the code, but writing an article is not enough to read. I can’t change such a large text at all. ”

“Then find someone to write.” Shen Xin said casually.

“Who do you want to write? No one wants to write such a large text. Moreover, Xiao Su’s energy is also devoted to “Crimination”, there is no time for him to take care of it.” Ji Yinxuan sighed.

Shen Xin thought for a while, what Ji Yinxuan said was also the truth. Even if it is a college student, few people will be exposed to the creation of game text.

“That…may I say a word?” Xi Muxin raised his hand quietly.

“Of course.” Ji Yinxuan nodded.

Xi Muxun took a deep breath, “Didn’t Sister Su Han ever fall in love?”

“Huh?” Ji Yinxuan was surprised at first, then raised her head to think for half a minute, “It seems that there is no, can you see it?”

“Yes. Although the female character and the male protagonist are related, when the male protagonist is talking to one of the female characters, the other female characters standing next to them feel that they should be taken for granted. I don’t feel jealous at all. It’s not normal.” Xi Muxin said.

“That’s right. Because Xiaosu has never been in love, so I don’t know what the state of the lovers is.” Ji Yinxuan nodded and looked at Xi Muxun’s eyes, which became brighter, “Sister, you shouldn’t talk about it.” Are you in love?”

Shen Xin immediately became alert and looked at Xi Muxin vigilantly.

“Where is there!” The blush instantly climbed to the root of Xi Muxin’s ears, “This is all written in love novels, and…Xin Ge’s cartoons are also mentioned. I have just been returning…summary recently.”