I'm an almighty star

Chapter 4 Your writing is not white



Chapter 4 Your writing is not white
That night, Mo Bai came back with a guitar on his back with a tired face.

There was nothing to gain today.

After all, it's been a long time since I sang, and Mo Tiansheng's voice was broken, this singing, let alone making any money on the street, almost scare people away.

However, it cannot be said that there is no harvest in today's singing.

At least Mo Bai's face has become a little thicker, just as many passers-by hear Mo Bai's broken voice from time to time covering his mouth and laughing, but Mo Bai is still singing leisurely.

Moreover, it's not that Mo Bai didn't make money. No, there is still an income of 5 cents.

Hehe, it's not easy to sing.

Mo Bai laughed at himself and put 5 cents in his pocket.

When I got home, I took a comfortable hot bath, but it was enough to wash away the exhaustion of singing that day.

After making a cup of tea, Mo Bai entered the background of Qidian Chinese.com.

Favorite 7.

Looking at this data, Mo Bai was a little dumbfounded.

In one day, there are only 7 favorites.

Although Mo Bai is a street writer, he also knows that in general, even if he doesn't sign a contract, he can increase by 50 a day.

However, although he was a little depressed, Mo Bai was not discouraged.

Literary works do not mean that as soon as you get good grades, your works will be popular in the future.

Many popular works, when they were just released, also had little response.

And when such works really broke out his power, a series of works that performed well in the past would have to be stepped on by him.

Thinking about it this way, I feel calm.

Without further ado, I once again extracted the Three Heroes and Five Righteousness from the life skills, and updated two chapters.

Internet articles must be serialized in order to attract popularity. Although Mo Bai is eager to complete tasks to obtain skill points, and then go to various professional circles, he is not in a hurry for the time being, so he can only update slowly first.

After the upload was over, Mo Bai logged on to the TT account, ready to add an author group.

Haozai has also been involved in the online literature circle. Although he is on the street, he also knows about the author group.

Now that he has resigned, there are many opportunities to chat with some authors in the group.

Cabbage group.

Mo Bai joined a group of authors called "cabbage group".

"welcome the new guy."

"Warmly welcome to join the group."

"Another base friend is here, welcome, welcome."

As soon as he entered the group, everyone was still very lively, but when he saw the welcome speech, three black lines appeared on Mo Bai's head.

What group are you joining?

Is this really a group of authors?

"This, this, thank you, thank you for your care, I am a man, I like women, and I don't want to be a base."

"Haha, brother Mo Bai, these basic friends are just kidding, welcome, welcome, by the way, send you the link to the book to see?"

The group manager "Xinfeng" made a big laugh and said enthusiastically.

"Little brother's three heroes and five righteousness, please give more pointers."

Copy the link of the book page of "Three Heroes and Five Righteousness", and then send it to the group.

Everyone in the group is an author, and some friends who are free click and take a look.

A few minutes later, the group manager spoke again: "Khan, that, brother Mo Bai, are you a new author?"

"Well, let's do it."

Although he had written books in his previous life, he should be considered a new author when he came to this world.

"No wonder."

"what happened?"

Mo Bai had some doubts.

"Haha, it's nothing, all new writers are like this. Look, your book title, Three Heroes and Five Righteousness, how do you say it. Although the name seems to be okay, it doesn't seem to know what it means. So, others look at you. The title of the novel, it is estimated that it will not be clicked. If it is not clicked, the natural results will not be very good. "

"Makes sense."

Mo Bai nodded and said.

"Also, your profile is too ordinary. It's not innovative or refreshing. You must know that our online articles rely on innovation and refreshment. Your profile is written by a newcomer author at first glance. , too bland."

"That's true."

Mo Bai is also not satisfied with such an introduction, but for people in this world who don't know what martial arts is, they can only write like this.

"However, none of the above is the point."

"What's the point?"

"Your text is too literary."

Xinfeng seems to be an old author, and his analysis is eloquent. He continued to comment: "You have to know what is popular on the Internet now, and what is popular is white. What is white, you have to write the novel a little bit whiter and simpler. , must not be Wenqing. Although, I admit that your writing is good, but I don't believe this. There is a saying that Wenqing is a kind of disease that needs to be cured. Did you see the name of our group, cabbage group , you will know why our group is called the cabbage group. And your pseudonym, Mo Bai, what does Mo Bai mean. It’s just not white, do you want to write articles that are not white? Sing the opposite."

"Haha, Xinfeng is awesome, his eyesight has soared recently."

"Xinfeng Mighty, come and see my new book later."

"And me, the boss of Xinfeng, I will comment on me later."

After Xinfeng finished speaking, another author, "Baili", also said: "Brother Mo Bai, as a new author, I suggest you go to the group file to download a copy of the golden three chapters of writing experience. If you want to develop online articles , you must learn how to write the first three chapters of a novel, which will be of great help to you."

"Ok."

Mo Bai nodded, opened the group file sharing, and downloaded a document called "Golden Three Chapters".

Opening the document, Mo Bai browsed carefully.

After half an hour, Mo Bai closed the document.

It turns out that this document is the writing experience of the No.1 "Tomato" in the world's online literature. street.However, Mo Bai thought about it for a while. Although it is easier to get the attention of the public when writing online articles, but for literature, Wen Qing's works are not necessarily unread.

Of course, although Mo Bai did not fully agree with the three-chapter theory of "Tomato", Mo Bai also absorbed the writing experience of "Tomato" very seriously.All roads lead to Rome, and this theory may also have its merits.

(End of this chapter)


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