Chapter : The Reason for the Rewrite.
TLDR: The story is different than the original, but taking inspiration from it. Even if you read the original, this is worth reading again because there will be a lot of changes and improvements. You can move on to the actual first chap(Next chap) now, I hope you enjoy it.
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Hello there, I wanted to make this the first chapter for anyone who has ever tried giving the original version a try. I will say I looked back at it, and damn, it's bad.
I kind of lost the plot midway through, and since I was stressed and sleep-deprived, I was just spitting out whatever would get a chapter done.
I would have originally just left it to be forgotten, but darn you, readers, and your constant reading! Every time I checked my original account, I would see a bunch of new comments, even years after it had been posted. So, for those of you who still care for my story even years later, this is for you.
This rewrite comes with three years of writing experience and over 500k words of writing experience. So, I am a way better writer than I used to be, which is reflected in my writing(I hope lol).
This story carries on with the heart of the original, but it will be the "Enhanced Edition" So there will be a lot of different changes as you will be able to see in the first few chapters. But I am getting rid of a lot of the bad choices I did.
I am always open to feedback and suggestions, but this comes with the understanding that this is my story, so I will only implement the suggestions I think will fit with the story. As long as you are fine with that, then feel free to suggest as much as you wish. I always appreciate the ideas.
My main focus is still my Persona story, so understand that this won't be daily uploads, but I still plan for 2-3 chaps at minimum.
With all that said, I hope you all enjoy the story. I will see you all next chap. Have a Bon Voyage.