Dad's Entertainment Life
Chapter 47 The Crew (2)
Chapter 47 The Crew ([-])
A soft female voice came from the side, but Wang Yuhan put the script in his hand on the table, looked up at Lin Qirong and said.
"Yes, Teacher Wang Yuhan." Lin Qirong nodded, "This is my work."
Wang Yuhan's wonderful eyes focused on him, making him feel a sense of oppression.
Is this the aura of a superstar?Lin Qirong couldn't help thinking.
Wang Yuhan clapped his palms lightly, "It's a very good script. I didn't expect you to be able to write such a script at such a young age."
"I think so too." Yan Weiye on the other side folded his arms and said, "It seems that our screenwriter is a person with a story."
Meng Zi covered her mouth and smiled lightly, "I think so too. Reading the script is like seeing real life happening in reality. I was shocked at the first sight. That's why I took this drama without hesitation. s reason."
"Thank you for your compliments, uh, should it be a compliment?" Lin Qirong asked with a smile.
"If you can tell us how you created this script, it will be considered a compliment." Wang Yuhan said.
"Actually, I have been thinking about this drama for a long time." Lin Qirong said, "Because of some previous experiences, I have written a lot of urban emotional dramas and family ethics dramas, so I am very familiar with these routines.
But I am very tired of this kind of routine, so I have this drama. A TV series that originates from real life and is higher than real life is a real urban drama, and a TV series that can make the audience feel the same is what I think works you want. "
"Wait a minute, you said you wrote a lot of scripts? Why haven't I heard your name?" Yan Weiye asked.
"Yes, according to your writing skills, you should have become famous a long time ago." Meng Zi echoed.
Lin Qirong smiled wryly, but did not answer.
"Let me talk about this," Wu Qingsong took over the topic and said, "Teacher Lin was originally a screenwriter for Red Maple TV. Later, he resigned for some reasons, and then worked as, um, a ghostwriter for a period of time."
"Ghostwriting?" Wang Yuhan and the others were stunned for a moment. They naturally knew what kind of occupation it was, and they were very lowly. They didn't expect Lin Qirong to be a ghostwriter before.
Lin Qirong nodded, "Director Wu is right, it is precisely because of this experience and writing too many plots of the same routine that I came up with the idea of creating this drama.
I would also like to thank Director Wu for giving me this opportunity to sign my script on my script and then meet everyone. "
Wu Qingsong blushed a little, he still remembered the fact that he deliberately belittled the script at the time, and he knew that he could not be thanked by Lin Qirong.
Wang Yuhan clapped his hands lightly and said, "Life can sharpen people, and it also gives you a chance to succeed."
Lin Qirong said, "Yes, so I face all this with a grateful attitude. Everyone is a capable actor, and I believe that this drama will be able to perform wonderfully."
Yan Weiye said, "Then you, the screenwriter, have to talk to us about the play. My role is not complicated, but it is not good to play it well. Do you think it is necessary to add some conflict scenes to make this character fuller? "
Lin Qirong's heart skipped a beat, why was he the first to change the play?
"How do you want to change it?"
Yan Weiye frowned slightly, "I just think that the role of He Han is too single, there is nothing to dig out, and the mental journey doesn't seem to have changed much, do you want to change it in the later stage?
For example, make some changes, do some crazy things for the heroine Luo Zijun, so that the audience will have a better time watching. "
Lin Qirong sighed inwardly, he had completely revised the original plot, and reorganized the plot, so that the relationship between He Han and Luo Zijun became more natural.
In the original plot, He Han almost changed into a different person later on. He transformed into a warm man for Luo Zijun, whom he looked down on before, protected her, and did many crazy things.
This did make his image more plump, but it directly led to a decline in the quality of the drama "The First Half of My Life", and brought the topic of women's independence to an abrupt end.
He understood why such conflicts occurred in his previous life. Perhaps the screenwriter had to modify it to cater to the market or because of the director's and actors' requirements. After all, dramatic conflicts are more likely to attract the attention of the audience.
This is not the case in Yi Shu's novels.
In fact it was a complete failure.
"Teacher Yan." He picked up the script on the table and said, "In your eyes, what kind of person is He Han?"
"Elite, cold, rational, with a touch of sensibility." Yan Weiye said without hesitation.
"That's a good summary." Lin Qirong nodded and said, "Such a person, who has been in love with Tang Jing for ten years and is unwilling to talk about marriage, is very disgusted with Luo Zijun who is like a parasite at first. Do you think such a person Is it possible for a person to become a warm man?
Or would he become someone desperate for love because of Luo Zijun, and do such crazy things? "
Yan Weiye thought carefully for a while, then shook his head.
"If he did crazy things for Luo Zijun, then why is he so cruel to Vivian and Tang Jing? Doesn't he love Tang Jing? Isn't Vivian pretty?
Although Luo Zijun is beautiful, can he make such a big change?
No, He Han's basic goal of women's aesthetics is to be independent and self-improving, and to be able to stand shoulder to shoulder with others.
Because of this, he refused all kinds of temptations and waited for Tang Jing's answer, because Tang Jing satisfied his requirements for women.
If he really changed his personality because of Luo Zijun, from a domineering president to a warm man who is crazy about love, if we were the audience, what would we think of him? "
"Scumbag." Wang Yuhan said directly, "It's normal for Luo Zijun to like him, because he is her life mentor, spiritually dependent, and he is such a capable and handsome man.
Although it will be very sad to snatch a boyfriend who is like a brother and sister, but it is credible from the perspective of human nature, and there are too many such things in reality.
But He Han is different, Tang Jing is good enough, maybe the two couldn't get together due to other reasons, but suddenly falling in love with Luo Zijun is too exaggerated. "
"Yes, scumbag." Lin Qirong nodded and said, "The character design of He Han will collapse in an instant, so what is the difference between him and Chen Junsheng?
My setting for him is that in the process of helping Luo Zijun, I gradually developed a certain affection. While giving her spiritual support, I also did more things for her.
But I don't think that kind of exaggerated love affair with Junjue that only dare to be in harmony with the sky and the earth, I don't think it will happen to them, because of his character, and because there is Tang Jing in the middle.
I don't want to join an overly intense plot, because I don't want to spoil the character I have painstakingly created.
The most important thing is that it is related to the theme of this TV series. I am writing about love, and more importantly, about women's dignity and independence.
If you change according to what you said, not only will it fail to awaken those women who regard their husbands as heaven, but it will strengthen their belief in being Cinderella and bet all their happiness on finding a man.
It doesn't matter if the first one is not good, I'm pretty enough, just find a good one next time.
But in reality, they are not Luo Zijun, they will not meet He Han who is willing to give everything for themselves and shelter from the wind and rain, but they will more often meet people like Chen Junsheng or Lao Jin. "
Yan Weiye fell into deep thought, apparently moved by Lin Qirong's analysis.
"Actually, there are still many things that can be explored in this role. For example, He Han's complicated feelings for Tang Jing, admiration and admiration, but he can't get close, because they are the same person, they are both sharp-edged and extremely rigid, and they can't get along. Difficult to come together.
And Luo Zijun gradually transformed from a parasite he despised to the extreme into a confident and independent professional woman under his guidance. At the same time, she had an aura that attracted him, so he fell in love with her unconsciously. .
The mental journey and the grasp of details are very exquisite acting skills. I think this should be a big test to deduce a unique He Han. "
Yan Weiye breathed a sigh of relief, patted the script in his hand and said with a wry smile, "Now I know that I haven't fully understood the script, so I made you laugh.
My thinking is still stuck in the routine of acting in the past, thank you for waking me up, if I still act according to the old habits, it will be bad. "
"You're welcome, if you need anything, you can discuss it with me at any time, I'd be happy to discuss it with you.
Your opinion is actually correct. We can discuss it. Under reasonable circumstances, we can design some dramatic plots to make He Han, who has always been ruthless, go crazy. After all, love is indescribable, right? "
"Yes, your words won my heart. I feel that this drama can help me make progress." Yan Weiye smiled heartily, "Now we are friends. If I have any ideas, I will come to you directly."
Lin Qirong stretched out his hand to shake his hand and smiled, "Should I be a little more panicky, after all, you are a first-line superstar, and I'm just a small screenwriter."
"Do you think this is an expression of panic?" Yan Weiye pointed at Lin Qirong and the others and smiled, "I believe in my judgment. After this drama, you will be a famous screenwriter all over China."
"Then I will honor your words, I will treat you to dinner if you are really famous."
Yan Weiye laughed dumbly, "Then I will remember your meal."
Wang Yuhan on the side knocked on the table with the script with some dissatisfaction, "You two elders cherish each other there, don't you think us a few people in your eyes?"
"Where would you dare?" Lin Qirong turned to her and said with a smile, "It's just that I have been thinking about what Teacher Yan said, and I feel that too many changes will affect the quality of the whole TV series, so I said more."
Wang Yuhan waved his hands and said, "Okay, I don't blame you. What about my character Luo Zijun? Do you have any suggestions?"
Please continue to support me, bookmark and recommend a wave.The pace of this book will slow down, absorbing the lesson of the previous "Inspiration Superstar" which was too fast-paced and ended with more than 100 million words, and will slowly tell a moving story.
(End of this chapter)
A soft female voice came from the side, but Wang Yuhan put the script in his hand on the table, looked up at Lin Qirong and said.
"Yes, Teacher Wang Yuhan." Lin Qirong nodded, "This is my work."
Wang Yuhan's wonderful eyes focused on him, making him feel a sense of oppression.
Is this the aura of a superstar?Lin Qirong couldn't help thinking.
Wang Yuhan clapped his palms lightly, "It's a very good script. I didn't expect you to be able to write such a script at such a young age."
"I think so too." Yan Weiye on the other side folded his arms and said, "It seems that our screenwriter is a person with a story."
Meng Zi covered her mouth and smiled lightly, "I think so too. Reading the script is like seeing real life happening in reality. I was shocked at the first sight. That's why I took this drama without hesitation. s reason."
"Thank you for your compliments, uh, should it be a compliment?" Lin Qirong asked with a smile.
"If you can tell us how you created this script, it will be considered a compliment." Wang Yuhan said.
"Actually, I have been thinking about this drama for a long time." Lin Qirong said, "Because of some previous experiences, I have written a lot of urban emotional dramas and family ethics dramas, so I am very familiar with these routines.
But I am very tired of this kind of routine, so I have this drama. A TV series that originates from real life and is higher than real life is a real urban drama, and a TV series that can make the audience feel the same is what I think works you want. "
"Wait a minute, you said you wrote a lot of scripts? Why haven't I heard your name?" Yan Weiye asked.
"Yes, according to your writing skills, you should have become famous a long time ago." Meng Zi echoed.
Lin Qirong smiled wryly, but did not answer.
"Let me talk about this," Wu Qingsong took over the topic and said, "Teacher Lin was originally a screenwriter for Red Maple TV. Later, he resigned for some reasons, and then worked as, um, a ghostwriter for a period of time."
"Ghostwriting?" Wang Yuhan and the others were stunned for a moment. They naturally knew what kind of occupation it was, and they were very lowly. They didn't expect Lin Qirong to be a ghostwriter before.
Lin Qirong nodded, "Director Wu is right, it is precisely because of this experience and writing too many plots of the same routine that I came up with the idea of creating this drama.
I would also like to thank Director Wu for giving me this opportunity to sign my script on my script and then meet everyone. "
Wu Qingsong blushed a little, he still remembered the fact that he deliberately belittled the script at the time, and he knew that he could not be thanked by Lin Qirong.
Wang Yuhan clapped his hands lightly and said, "Life can sharpen people, and it also gives you a chance to succeed."
Lin Qirong said, "Yes, so I face all this with a grateful attitude. Everyone is a capable actor, and I believe that this drama will be able to perform wonderfully."
Yan Weiye said, "Then you, the screenwriter, have to talk to us about the play. My role is not complicated, but it is not good to play it well. Do you think it is necessary to add some conflict scenes to make this character fuller? "
Lin Qirong's heart skipped a beat, why was he the first to change the play?
"How do you want to change it?"
Yan Weiye frowned slightly, "I just think that the role of He Han is too single, there is nothing to dig out, and the mental journey doesn't seem to have changed much, do you want to change it in the later stage?
For example, make some changes, do some crazy things for the heroine Luo Zijun, so that the audience will have a better time watching. "
Lin Qirong sighed inwardly, he had completely revised the original plot, and reorganized the plot, so that the relationship between He Han and Luo Zijun became more natural.
In the original plot, He Han almost changed into a different person later on. He transformed into a warm man for Luo Zijun, whom he looked down on before, protected her, and did many crazy things.
This did make his image more plump, but it directly led to a decline in the quality of the drama "The First Half of My Life", and brought the topic of women's independence to an abrupt end.
He understood why such conflicts occurred in his previous life. Perhaps the screenwriter had to modify it to cater to the market or because of the director's and actors' requirements. After all, dramatic conflicts are more likely to attract the attention of the audience.
This is not the case in Yi Shu's novels.
In fact it was a complete failure.
"Teacher Yan." He picked up the script on the table and said, "In your eyes, what kind of person is He Han?"
"Elite, cold, rational, with a touch of sensibility." Yan Weiye said without hesitation.
"That's a good summary." Lin Qirong nodded and said, "Such a person, who has been in love with Tang Jing for ten years and is unwilling to talk about marriage, is very disgusted with Luo Zijun who is like a parasite at first. Do you think such a person Is it possible for a person to become a warm man?
Or would he become someone desperate for love because of Luo Zijun, and do such crazy things? "
Yan Weiye thought carefully for a while, then shook his head.
"If he did crazy things for Luo Zijun, then why is he so cruel to Vivian and Tang Jing? Doesn't he love Tang Jing? Isn't Vivian pretty?
Although Luo Zijun is beautiful, can he make such a big change?
No, He Han's basic goal of women's aesthetics is to be independent and self-improving, and to be able to stand shoulder to shoulder with others.
Because of this, he refused all kinds of temptations and waited for Tang Jing's answer, because Tang Jing satisfied his requirements for women.
If he really changed his personality because of Luo Zijun, from a domineering president to a warm man who is crazy about love, if we were the audience, what would we think of him? "
"Scumbag." Wang Yuhan said directly, "It's normal for Luo Zijun to like him, because he is her life mentor, spiritually dependent, and he is such a capable and handsome man.
Although it will be very sad to snatch a boyfriend who is like a brother and sister, but it is credible from the perspective of human nature, and there are too many such things in reality.
But He Han is different, Tang Jing is good enough, maybe the two couldn't get together due to other reasons, but suddenly falling in love with Luo Zijun is too exaggerated. "
"Yes, scumbag." Lin Qirong nodded and said, "The character design of He Han will collapse in an instant, so what is the difference between him and Chen Junsheng?
My setting for him is that in the process of helping Luo Zijun, I gradually developed a certain affection. While giving her spiritual support, I also did more things for her.
But I don't think that kind of exaggerated love affair with Junjue that only dare to be in harmony with the sky and the earth, I don't think it will happen to them, because of his character, and because there is Tang Jing in the middle.
I don't want to join an overly intense plot, because I don't want to spoil the character I have painstakingly created.
The most important thing is that it is related to the theme of this TV series. I am writing about love, and more importantly, about women's dignity and independence.
If you change according to what you said, not only will it fail to awaken those women who regard their husbands as heaven, but it will strengthen their belief in being Cinderella and bet all their happiness on finding a man.
It doesn't matter if the first one is not good, I'm pretty enough, just find a good one next time.
But in reality, they are not Luo Zijun, they will not meet He Han who is willing to give everything for themselves and shelter from the wind and rain, but they will more often meet people like Chen Junsheng or Lao Jin. "
Yan Weiye fell into deep thought, apparently moved by Lin Qirong's analysis.
"Actually, there are still many things that can be explored in this role. For example, He Han's complicated feelings for Tang Jing, admiration and admiration, but he can't get close, because they are the same person, they are both sharp-edged and extremely rigid, and they can't get along. Difficult to come together.
And Luo Zijun gradually transformed from a parasite he despised to the extreme into a confident and independent professional woman under his guidance. At the same time, she had an aura that attracted him, so he fell in love with her unconsciously. .
The mental journey and the grasp of details are very exquisite acting skills. I think this should be a big test to deduce a unique He Han. "
Yan Weiye breathed a sigh of relief, patted the script in his hand and said with a wry smile, "Now I know that I haven't fully understood the script, so I made you laugh.
My thinking is still stuck in the routine of acting in the past, thank you for waking me up, if I still act according to the old habits, it will be bad. "
"You're welcome, if you need anything, you can discuss it with me at any time, I'd be happy to discuss it with you.
Your opinion is actually correct. We can discuss it. Under reasonable circumstances, we can design some dramatic plots to make He Han, who has always been ruthless, go crazy. After all, love is indescribable, right? "
"Yes, your words won my heart. I feel that this drama can help me make progress." Yan Weiye smiled heartily, "Now we are friends. If I have any ideas, I will come to you directly."
Lin Qirong stretched out his hand to shake his hand and smiled, "Should I be a little more panicky, after all, you are a first-line superstar, and I'm just a small screenwriter."
"Do you think this is an expression of panic?" Yan Weiye pointed at Lin Qirong and the others and smiled, "I believe in my judgment. After this drama, you will be a famous screenwriter all over China."
"Then I will honor your words, I will treat you to dinner if you are really famous."
Yan Weiye laughed dumbly, "Then I will remember your meal."
Wang Yuhan on the side knocked on the table with the script with some dissatisfaction, "You two elders cherish each other there, don't you think us a few people in your eyes?"
"Where would you dare?" Lin Qirong turned to her and said with a smile, "It's just that I have been thinking about what Teacher Yan said, and I feel that too many changes will affect the quality of the whole TV series, so I said more."
Wang Yuhan waved his hands and said, "Okay, I don't blame you. What about my character Luo Zijun? Do you have any suggestions?"
Please continue to support me, bookmark and recommend a wave.The pace of this book will slow down, absorbing the lesson of the previous "Inspiration Superstar" which was too fast-paced and ended with more than 100 million words, and will slowly tell a moving story.
(End of this chapter)
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