Attack on Titan: The Strongest Newcomer

Hey everyone! How's the story going so far? I know I'm not doing the best job, but I'm trying to improve every day. I just wanted to ask if there's anything you've noticed—like name inconsistencies, repetitive words, or awkward sentences—that you think I should fix. I know it's my responsibility as the writer to catch these things, and honestly, it's a bit embarrassing to ask, but I've decided to go through the whole fanfic again to fix any mistakes. If you spot anything, feel free to let me know in the comments! Also, are you enjoying the fanfic? I'd love to hear your thoughts!